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Post by corvette1710 on May 31, 2015 8:38:09 GMT
I only count Nihlium and Pseudo's characters, with a reservation for Bergy's.
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Post by DSkillz on May 31, 2015 8:49:51 GMT
Ah, my bad, then.  But yeah, guys, from a glance this actually looks like one of the easier contests you've had. Should be more entrants than this. |
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Post by Nihlium on May 31, 2015 22:07:59 GMT
Yeah. Could have been finals week syndrome fr some College/University students here. This months competition should be better.
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Post by corvette1710 on Jun 1, 2015 10:07:09 GMT
Sadlife, as promised.  Nah. I really liked the entries for this month, at least. Results will be posted by noon at the latest. |
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Post by corvette1710 on Jun 1, 2015 12:03:17 GMT
This was undeniably a close one for me. Both were kind of "forest protector" types who killed people. One, it seemed, however, was doing it for the good of the forest, while one was a twisted facsimile of the "mommy-type."
The Winner: The Warden, by Nihlium.
I thought this entry was really cool and the way you fit him into Little Lovecraft was a nice touch. There were a few places where another proofreading would've done you some good, most notably with commas and pluralization, but I really liked your pacing and flow.
The Mother, by Pseudo
While the overall feel of the character was really good, I couldn't quite decide if she was a hero or a villain. Also, the one-stanza invisibility kind of threw me off, like a "that's it?" sort of deal. I congratulate you, however, on your tone, which made the Mother into this mysterious figure for me. Perhaps role-ambiguity is what you were shooting for, and if so, good job; that said, I'd have preferred some more details.
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Post by Nihlium on Jun 1, 2015 15:29:22 GMT
I actually thought I was going to lose this one. But yay me........I guess. I'll have the June Contest up by tonight.....maybe. Hopefully more people will enter, cause' I have some good ideas.
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Post by DSkillz on Jun 1, 2015 22:29:37 GMT
Check the news feed, you guys. |
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Post by pseudo on Jun 2, 2015 18:38:14 GMT
Well done, dude. I should have known that going Haiku was a bad idea.
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Post by Bergy on Jun 3, 2015 4:29:08 GMT
Sorry, sorry, sorry. And sorry. My life basically got entirely away from me in that last week, I just didn't have the time/creativity/couldn'tfigureoutthisexcuse for making a contest entry for May.
But hey, June contest maybe?
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