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Wallop
Jan 26, 2015 14:15:54 GMT
Post by Nihlium on Jan 26, 2015 14:15:54 GMT
Another homerun Deo. I actually liked this one more than Galaxy Girl.
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Wallop
Jan 26, 2015 15:24:45 GMT
Post by omfg on Jan 26, 2015 15:24:45 GMT
I thought she was from New York, so it hit me like a brick wall when I began to read her with a British tone. Looking at the location, it's explained though, but I think she sounds more Aussie than Britbong.
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Wallop
Jan 26, 2015 18:25:10 GMT
Post by pseudo on Jan 26, 2015 18:25:10 GMT
She's pretty reminiscent of another character. Heck, that picture might even be who I'm talking about. i.ytimg.com/vi/1qe6CnXPZ7c/maxresdefault.jpgThis is Vi. She has explosive power gauntlets and she works in law enforcement. Her hair is pink and as she leaps into battle she shouts, "Here comes the pain." She's even got a dial right there on her left gauntlet like you wrote. I don't think the character has to be redone, but, maybe using the name Vi was an unfortunate coincidence
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Wallop
Jan 26, 2015 20:53:55 GMT
Post by deo on Jan 26, 2015 20:53:55 GMT
She's pretty reminiscent of another character. Heck, that picture might even be who I'm talking about. i.ytimg.com/vi/1qe6CnXPZ7c/maxresdefault.jpgThis is Vi. She has explosive power gauntlets and she works in law enforcement. Her hair is pink and as she leaps into battle she shouts, "Here comes the pain." She's even got a dial right there on her left gauntlet like you wrote. I don't think the character has to be redone, but, maybe using the name Vi was an unfortunate coincidence I dig what you're laying down, but its not a coincidence. It is from art of the same character, but I was searching for power gauntlets when I found the picture and this was the best thing I came up with. I can change the name, but I originally went with Vi because if you look close at the pic she has VI tattooed across her face, and I felt like it had to be explained. Why else would she have VI on her face; maybe she just really liked the #6, and preferred numerals? But looking at the final image what I'm using is smaller then what I was first looking at so the tattoo is less visible, so I can change that bit. I looked up a little about the LOL character while I was writing Wallop. She's a cop from an alternate steampunk universe. To say that they're both law enforcement is sort of a stretch though. Wallop's a superhero, maybe they're both heroic but she isn't a cop. Though I didn't know about the catchphrase "here comes the pain" so that one is just a weird coincidence. Same with the dial bit, that was just my way of trying to explain kinetic absorption without a lot more talking. So yeah, for the whole thing its kind of like the conspiracist and Rorschach. I'm not copying the character, but this picture best represents what I had in my minds eye, so they'll inherently be similar in physical appearance. On an unrelated note, writing dialects is hard. It's supposed to be Cockney.
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