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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 7, 2013 15:58:38 GMT
Dante (Devil May Cry 1-4 edition) upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/84/Dante_transparent.pngWhile searching for demons in a city he sees a weird beacon. Thinking its a portal for demons to come out of he grabs Rebellion and a few other weapons and then walks toward it. (Yup that's right I'm joining my own rp with one of my most favorite video game character).
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Post by SSJRuss on Sept 7, 2013 17:56:06 GMT
Awesome!
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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 7, 2013 17:56:30 GMT
At exactly around 4:30 I'm starting the rp. Just so you guys know.
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Post by SSJRuss on Sept 8, 2013 14:08:08 GMT
Well...lets begin lol
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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 8, 2013 15:39:21 GMT
Yeah I'm gonna post it in a few minutes. Oh yeah SSJRuss you're first
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Post by Nova Prime X on Sept 8, 2013 18:00:04 GMT
That was the RP you were so anxiously waiting/recruiting for? Seems a bit anti-climactic but to each his own. Have fun guys!
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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 8, 2013 19:24:08 GMT
It'll get better later on
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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 9, 2013 18:44:02 GMT
Kainboa your up
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Post by Nova Prime X on Sept 9, 2013 21:35:16 GMT
Anyone else getting a homosexual undertone with some of the choice of words in the RP? Even with the one sentence posts...
On that note, gotta get more mature. Working on it.
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Post by AvP on Sept 10, 2013 12:03:15 GMT
lol
EDIT: Wait... my posting title... the hell
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Post by kainboa on Sept 11, 2013 18:02:53 GMT
Sorry for the late response, but due to RL stuff, I'll be unable to participate in this RP until the 22nd or 23rd.
I'm aware that this might remove me completely, and don't have any problem with that, there'll be other rp's later on.
If I can rejoin the rp at that point though, I'll be more than happy to participate.
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Post by thetruth40 on Sept 11, 2013 18:45:18 GMT
xLegacyx you're up on the rp. Bye the way join anytime you need to kainboa
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Post by Nova Prime X on Sept 11, 2013 23:37:23 GMT
A piece of advice that I think would benefit the RP greatly.
Don't stick to the one or two sentence posts. Show, don't tell. For example...
"The teleporter malfunctioned and instead found Martian Manhunter." would be better written as...
"The teleporter emitted a series of whirring noises, a clunky echo reverberating through the area as the device let out a spark or two. A slight aroma of smoke filtered through as the technician grimaced at the teleporter. "Come on you stupid machine!" He bellowed, giving it a quick fix up via percussive maintenance, in the form of a kick to jumpstart the process. The machine ceased making noise but something still felt wrong, yet they could not place their fingers on it.
At least, not until a bald, green cape clad alien individual materialized in front of them rather than the blond boisterous bruiser of Norse Legend they were expecting."
In my humble opinion, that would make it much more interesting and fun.
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Post by A realist on Sept 11, 2013 23:48:14 GMT
Show off.
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Post by Nova Prime X on Sept 11, 2013 23:51:41 GMT
Yes, that's the point.
Show, don't tell.
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